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Firstly I have to say that I love this photo! It makes me feel that I've walked into an other-worldly setting. Great job on the choice and timing of this shot.

A couple of things I would consider are contrast and point of focus.

This image would really pop if you used photoshop (or something else) to darken the shadows and bushed in the midfield...I think that it would highlight the difference between the flowers and the foreground better. As it is right now, the colors back there look a little washed out because of atmospheric haze.

As for point of focus...for me the central theme of the image is the idea of the statue. What is it? Does it mean something to the viewer? or the flowers? or the trees? I think that you can do more to emphasize the presence of the statue by darkening the grass immediately in front of it and perhaps the shadows on the statue proper.

I love that the statue is obscured and it's purpose and details are left to the viewer. And curiosity is a powerful tool! When I look at this I imagine that I'm in a flowery cathedral and there is something I need to see at the other end.

Like I said, good job!

- Jake
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